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From:spazlady2002
Date:January 15th, 2010 12:14 am (UTC)
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oh wow that was nice. *smacks John upside the head* idiot man. thank you for sharing this story very nice.
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From:kisahawklin
Date:January 16th, 2010 01:48 am (UTC)
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Thank you!
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From:mezzo_cammin
Date:January 15th, 2010 12:27 am (UTC)
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Wow! This was so good! I really didn't want it to end, especially not *there*! Such good characterizations! And what creative gifts you thought of!

*puts in memories*
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From:kisahawklin
Date:January 16th, 2010 01:51 am (UTC)
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Thank you! The gifts really were the toughest part. They took forever to figure out. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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From:yinkawills
Date:January 15th, 2010 01:03 am (UTC)
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Brilliant writing!
True to character for ALL of them, not just Rodney and John.



Lovely. :):)

Yinka
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From:kisahawklin
Date:January 16th, 2010 01:51 am (UTC)
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Aw, thank you so much!
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From:d_odyssey
Date:January 15th, 2010 01:58 am (UTC)
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Oh, I love the fun and imagery of their "shopping" trip, what a place! Wonderful thought put into the gifts with perfect snark and blackmail between John and Rodney. Aww, a puddlejumper for Torren. Sneaky, sneaky Teyla. Great voices for the team as they open the presents and then figure out the reason for the giggling. Awesome hanglider! Love John and Rodney here with Rodney finally taking charge and telling John the answer. Enjoyable and fun story. Nice job!
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From:kisahawklin
Date:January 16th, 2010 01:52 am (UTC)
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Thank you so much!
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From:beachlass
Date:January 15th, 2010 03:23 am (UTC)
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Mmm. Lovely, lovely story. Your characterizations are filled with such heart and depth.
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From:kisahawklin
Date:January 16th, 2010 01:52 am (UTC)
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Oh wow. That's a wonderful compliment. Thank you, sweets. <3
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From:semielliptical
Date:January 15th, 2010 05:08 am (UTC)
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Oh, lovely! Rodney really is the best at talking; I love that he knows when not to ask John and also when to answer for him. :)
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From:kisahawklin
Date:January 16th, 2010 01:53 am (UTC)
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Ahaha - I'm so pleased that came across. I was wondering if it was too far of a reach. Thank you!
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From:danceswithgary
Date:January 15th, 2010 03:32 pm (UTC)
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A lovely emotional rollercoaster ride with the gifts and glee and sudden drop and then climb back to the top. :-D
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From:kisahawklin
Date:January 16th, 2010 01:53 am (UTC)
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Hee, yay! Thank you!
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From:outsideth3box
Date:January 15th, 2010 08:41 pm (UTC)
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Oh what wonderful and lovely team interactions! The gifts were gorgeous. I especially loved Rodney's anxieties about his beautiful team, and poor Teyla's misunderstanding. Astonishing such things don't happen a lot more often, really.

Good for Rodney following through with John, because he really is always right, *G*.
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From:kisahawklin
Date:January 16th, 2010 02:01 am (UTC)
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Yay, thank you! I love them as a team so that's always my favorite part.
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From:mirabile_dictu
Date:January 16th, 2010 12:43 am (UTC)
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This is really darling -- all the lovely team interaction. Wonderful!
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From:kisahawklin
Date:January 16th, 2010 02:10 am (UTC)
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Thank you so much!
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From:panisdead
Date:January 16th, 2010 01:44 am (UTC)
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Oh man, that's really great. Satisfying.
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From:kisahawklin
Date:January 16th, 2010 02:11 am (UTC)
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Yay, thank you!
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From:goddess47
Date:January 16th, 2010 03:15 am (UTC)
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So lovely!

Having to win prizes (whirled peas ::snorfle::), Christmas presents and Rodney getting used to the idea of getting things for his team! Hang gliders and ZedPMs!

Sneaky of Teyla to spike the cookies, I suspect she knew exactly what she was doing!

Such a sweet ending!
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From:kisahawklin
Date:January 16th, 2010 03:53 am (UTC)
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Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
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From:blackchaps
Date:January 16th, 2010 06:59 am (UTC)
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I'm... not sure how I got here. *stares around in wonder* What a great story - so glad to have read it!
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From:kisahawklin
Date:January 16th, 2010 06:38 pm (UTC)
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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From:korilian
Date:January 16th, 2010 12:51 pm (UTC)
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loved Rodney taking charge and all the team bits (It's always fun to see Teyla mess up a little). I can't believe he actually build a hang glider for Sheppard though! Or hell, maybe I can believe it. He'd probably be more inclined to trust John's life with something he built with his own two hands.
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From:kisahawklin
Date:January 16th, 2010 06:42 pm (UTC)
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See, and I took out the scene where Rodney hovers worryingly nearby in the jumper as John takes it out for the first time. And mentions that he's put in a tracker on it. And... yeah. I think he trusts his own hand more than others, and if John's going to do something stupid and reckless, it's going to be with something Rodney's made and with Rodney hovering nearby.
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From:looking4tarzan
Date:January 16th, 2010 01:04 pm (UTC)
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aw made me smile
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From:kisahawklin
Date:January 16th, 2010 06:42 pm (UTC)
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Yay, glad to hear it!
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From:michelel72
Date:January 16th, 2010 06:28 pm (UTC)
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Oh, wow. Normally I loathe "friendly"-drugging stories, but you really make it work here, as an honest misunderstanding, with the bonus of Teyla being as humanly flawed and capable of misunderstanding as everyone else. The sense of family and community throughout is wonderful. I love that Rodney knows to play to his own strengths (great voice for him, btw), and I simply adore you for having Rodney turn down the chance to force a truthful answer from John.
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From:kisahawklin
Date:January 16th, 2010 06:45 pm (UTC)
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having Rodney turn down the chance to force a truthful answer from John

Yeah, it really was meant to be that fic. I thought I'd get to the truthful answer and we'd be done. But then Rodney grew a conscience and I couldn't make him do it (and sort of thought John would be resentful if he did) and... yeah. I'm glad it turned out this way. Thank you for reading and commenting!
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From:sunnyd_lite
Date:February 14th, 2010 11:53 pm (UTC)
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Loved the gifts -- especially that Ronon not only thought to get Rodney the energy bars but called them lembas!

A child sized puddle jumper for Torren *ah*

And of course John could tell the truth and then avoid the issue completely *grin*
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From:kisahawklin
Date:February 15th, 2010 12:22 am (UTC)
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Hee, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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From:theeverdream
Date:February 15th, 2010 11:12 am (UTC)
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Really, really fantastic.
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From:kisahawklin
Date:February 16th, 2010 06:04 am (UTC)
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Thank you!
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From:onlystarchild
Date:February 16th, 2010 06:04 am (UTC)
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This is the perfect bedtime read. And - *sigh* - Rodney built John something he can fly with his mind. If that isn't a declaration of love, I don't know what is.

Lovely, lovely job. :)
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From:kisahawklin
Date:February 16th, 2010 06:08 am (UTC)
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Exactly! What says love more than 'If you have to do reckless things, at least let me build you the safest possible vehicle'?

Thank you for commenting!
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From:yo_helena
Date:December 14th, 2010 04:20 am (UTC)
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I just LOVE this. Slow, sweet stories like these always get me, and I tend to collect them like precious coins or something. I felt so bad for Teyla, who had no idea how much John would hate the cookie idea, but the end totally makes up for it, especially when Rodney's so forthright about loving John. "I'll only ask once and take you at your word." Man, what a scene. :.>

Going on my Delicious ASAP. Beautiful story!
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From:kisahawklin
Date:December 15th, 2010 02:22 am (UTC)
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Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it - it's still one of my favorites.